Sunday, September 16, 2007

Lovers of Delfhaven

Delfhaven

In a neighbouring suburb there used to be a coffee shop, a quaint place with huge windows and creaking wooden floors. A friend and I used to meet there occasionally to catch up and share news. Across the road is a jumbly old house filled with memories and ghosts. I recall sitting in the coffee shop waiting for Jane to turn up. I had my notebook out, as writers often do… It was then that I felt a presence. A woman, watching me, assessing me. I tuned in, susceptible as I am to these beings who’ve gone without going. She had a story to tell and as I listened and waited this is what flowed from my pen…


Daffodil yellow window frames, with matching awnings billowing on the wind. A yellow tin roof. Sash windows and potted geraniums and marigolds behind a bleached white picket fence. A house with a story to tell…
Fairy cakes on a refectory table. Autumnal chrysanthemums in a red enamel jug. Scrubbed wooden floor and tall airy windows. Illumination from a gleaming brass chandelier. A coffee shop now. Called Gryphons – with a story to tell…
There’s a ghost, I can feel her presence and her memories, drifting, watching, whispering with the breeze.
Smells of coffee linger on the air.
Empty soda bottles with violet blue statice stuffed in their necks.
I hear a rustle of old lace and a giggle – girlish yet cracked. She is amused, curious, shy and yet… She too has a story to tell.
He lived in the house opposite behind the daffodil yellow window frames. She is a ghost now, he was a ghost then but she loved him, even through his moods when the pots would fly and the shutters bang as he declared his frustration at being no longer fully alive.
The house with the yellow windows – Delfhaven…
The curtain in the upstairs room trembles, now as it did then. I think I see a pale hand, just as she thought she did.
Yes, I hear her whisper through the clatter of teacups.
“I did. I saw him watching me, felt his eyes upon me…”
The floorboard creaks. She knows I am here, am listening, like she listened to him. She edges closer, stepping through the waitress, who unseeing, moves on.
“We were lovers,” she whispers and across the road, I sense him sigh.


I never finished writing the story – never really started it – there were other things that came along, as there always are. But last week I drove past the house and as I waited in the traffic to make the crossing into the side road, I felt them again. Both of them, him and her, still waiting for their story to be told. They know I’m out here, I know they’re in there. The coffee shop has closed but I shall have to find a place sit nearby so I can listen to their story… For it seems to me they want it told to the world. But in the meanwhile the gryphons watch over them.


Watchful Gryphons

24 comments:

apprentice said...

Look forward to it. Halloween is coming up..........

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

This will take a while yet, something I'll come back to, got to get on with the current manuscript first! So many stories, never enough time!

Jefferson Davis said...

If we'd only heed the haunting whispers from the past, we might learn something about ourselves.

Great story Vanilla. I'm looking forward to the rest of it. :)

kimy said...

time.... definitely NEVER ENOUGH!! keep on keeping on can't wait until the next installment.

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Hey, JD - this one will take some time coming - it's not the current work in progress but it's definitely something I might come back to.

Yep, you're right, Kimy - where does the time go! I suspect the ghosts are wondering the same thing too. ;-)

I Beatrice said...

You ought to write that story! You can leave it too late with these things. Take it from me - I left until the very eleventh hour, and now there might never be time enough left to catch up...

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Oh I'm well aware of that, Beatrice - thing is, this story isn't a priority for me right now - more pressing stories are chasing me down! ;-)

Rob said...

"gone without going"

I just love that line.

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Thanks, Rob! But that's how it is with ghosts isn't it - gone by not gone :-)

Vesper said...

Do write it, Vanilla, you gave us a glimpse at its beauty. But then, who knows, maybe some stories are best untold - they can remain a dream... of daffodil yellow and gryphons...

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Well, we'll see Vesper - maybe it will be told, maybe not... At the moment the current work in progress takes precedence.

Rambler said...

Very interesting vanilla..

Jon M said...

ooooh! Tell the story! tell it! tell it!

Verilion said...

Maybe you can tell us in little bits on the blog, when you are having a break from the new MS... maybe.

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Ah, interesting is all around us, Rambler :-)

Well, I can't tell it Joh unless the ghosts tell it to me first. And I think that means having tea and cake with them which is a problem now the coffee shop has gone... Bugger.

Maybe, indeed, V - we'll see what the ghosts are willing to reveal.

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

I meant JON - sorry Joh er, I mean Jon... brain fried and now moving onto the grill setting... too many ghosts and muses bothering me...

Minx said...

Delfhaven - lovely name.

When the time is right, if the time is right....

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Absolutely so, Minx - it's up to the story.

John Eaton said...

Absolutely lovely, Abvanlah.

Each note in its own time,

John :)

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Thanks, John, glad you liked it.
Abvanlah, eh? - hmm, a creative composition ;-)

Wanderlust Scarlett said...

Love the story, and I REALLY love the gryffin photo; that's just wonderful!

Can't wait to read the details!


Scarlett & Viaggiatore

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

You know, it's funny Scarlett & V - I'd never noticed the gryphons sitting up there before - so maybe if I ever write this particular story, the gryphons will play a part too... :-)

Steve said...

Maybe the gryphon WASN'T there before. That could be a story in itself.

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Ooh, yes, Steve, cool idea!